The box was brown and it seems like it was a very very old box. On top of the box it said something, but I couldn't read wat it said since the box is very dusty so I wipe the box and it saids " My 1980 Time Capsule". No wonder why the box looks so old. When I open it, the memory box belongs to a girl! Most of the items that was in the time capsule was about Whitney Houston. It doesn't say what her name but she had alot of thing she put in her box that really old. The stuff that was in the box was a neon necklace, a record player disc, her diary, the 80's clothes, 80's disc movies and some pictures and posters of Whitney Houston. 
I was very curious how 1980s was like So I wanted to see her diary. What she wroted in her diary was her life how she lived in the 80s and what she liked about it. Also when I see her pictures that the took, it was her house. Her house looked very different from my house. What I have learn about looking inside the memory box of the 1980, It was indeed very different from 2013. What I also learn that they did a improvment of make the years more better then the old times. After I see all the things that was in the memory box, I wanted to know more and started to research about how the 80's was like and also want to know more about Whitney Houston. That is my story!
Phuong Linh,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story. Your first paragraph has a couple of capitalization errors and a few spelling mistakes.
"Long Long time ago, While I was at my backyard digging through the dirt planting flowers, My Shovel hit something hard. A box was buried in my backyard! I asked myself, It it any of my family stuff that they wanted to hide?"
Should be:
A long time ago, while I was in my backyard digging through the dirt and planting flowers, my shovel hit something hard. It was a box buried in my backyard! I asked myself if it was any of my families stuff that they wanted to hide.